Akayla’s Comment on the story

You have to click on the comment link to read Kayla’s insight into Jones’s story. Very insightful  about the three-act structure.

But I believe the murderer is identified. You have to read closely at the end. He finds bloody marks on the fire escape banister that leads to the apartment above.  And who lives in the apartment above? Tell me what you think. Use the comments feature.

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